I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teacher is Mr Janse
Wednesday, August 22, 2018
when earthquakes happen
When earthquakes happen there is a lot of life and property lost. So people who were in the earthquake have to go to camps until there home are rebuilt with the city. After an earthquake happens all that is left is a pile of debris with cracked roads. Some houses survive but the things inside don't survive. There are shattered windows broken floors or broken walls. The cost of the city's rebuild will be millions of dollars. But rebuilding a city takes a lot of time so people in the camps have to wait a long time until there homes are rebuilt.
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Your first sentence helped me to understand what your paragraph was about and what would come next. It is very clever the way you have put this sentence together. Using 'When'- then stating an important fact. You have added detail by carefully selecting the words you used, like -rebuild, debris, survive...
ReplyDeleteWell done.